Second Draft

Expression of Individuality Should Be Respected

Most of us live in a standardized life, we are often forced to do the same things, and we do those things. In contrast, we can see some people with highly individual look and who live with their own ways, many people view them unfavorably, then, what do you think about them? I think that they do very well, because they are confidant about themselves, not aware of the way other people are looking at them. For example, which kind of person do you prefer? A person who lives the same life with other people, and a person who live his/her own life that is different to other people's. Most of you must prefer the latter. By the same token, expression of individuality can be respected, though nowadays it is not. Also, people should not view them as wrong people, they are just "Different".

The definition of "Individuality" here is a person or thing of individual or distinctive character. Most people in Korea recognize that individuality of everyone is not respected, it changes as the society requires. For example, people tend to avoid jobs treated contemptuously and aim at the job that can earn much money or that is respected regardless of specialty.

week 10

week 9

week 7 narration

1.What do people already know about my topic?






2.What research has already been done about my topic?








3.What are the implications of my argument (What if I'm right? What if I'm right and people ignore me?)

Week 6 Introduction

Expression of Individuality Should Be Respected

Most of us live in a standardized life, we are often forced to do the same things, and we do those things. In contrast, we can see some people with highly individual look and who live with their own ways, many people view them unfavorably, then, what do you think about them? I think that they do very well, because they are confidant about themselves, not aware of the way other people are looking at them. For example, which kind of person do you prefer? A person who lives the same life with other people, and a person who live his/her own life that is different to other people's. Most of you must prefer the latter. By the same token, expression of individuality can be respected, though nowadays it is not. Also, people should not view them as wrong people, they are just "Different".

week 4,5

Expression of Individuality

개성의 개념,
현재 사회에서의 개성 표현 문제

week 3

Expression of Individuality should be respected.

    Source: http://www.pnas.org/content/100/4/1896.short
    Topic:  Individuality and variation in gene expression patterns in human blood (반박대비 )
    What I hope to learn from this source: to prepare for reputation
 

 Source: http://www.nature.com/news/2001/010611/full/news010614-4.html
Topic: People can recognize you just from the way you nod.
What I hope to learn from this source: I want to find some experts' opinions about expressions of Individuality.


Source: http://www.wikihow.com/Express-Your-Individuality
Topic: How to express your individuality?
What I hope to learn from this source: To tell people how to express individuality.

   Respecting individuality.

https://www.google.co.kr/#newwindow=1&q=respecting+individuality




OUTLINE

1.Introduction
 Recently, many people start to express their own individuality through many ways, like tattoo, hair, clothes......,However, most of them are not respected, and forced to live in a standardized life.

2.body
-Students are asked to keep their appearances clean.(benefits of individuality expression in school.)
-Companies ask their employees to wear similar suits.(benefits of individuality expression in company)
-The phenomenon that people copy trendy stuffs.

3.conclusion

week 2

Source: 

http://kin.naver.com/qna/detail.nhn?d1id=11&dirId=1121&docId=204813450&qb=6rCc7ISxIO2RnO2YhA==&enc=utf8&section=kin&rank=1&search_sort=0&spq=1&pid=SssRPwpySDlssbJCMSossssssss-236496&sid=VAAUewpyVlgAAG7kG28

My topic:
Expression of individuality should be respected.

What I hope to learn from this source: 
I want to find the current state of the problem that student's expressions of individuality are not respected.

Notes:
-I should research definition of Individuality.
-Through expressing individuality, students can reflect their nature.
-To realize their own nature, they can find many ways.
-The relationship among them can be matched.

Final thoughts:
This source is interesting, but the arguments are too subjective. I think I have to find objective arguments.




Research proposal

What is my current topic?
Expression of individuality

What are my guiding questions?
Why people don't express themselves, follow the trend?

What are my current thoughts?
Most people don't respect individuality

What is the opposition?
The opposition may say that people don't like the different.

Research Question 1

pop

art

express myself