2014년 11월 16일 일요일

Second Draft

Expression of Individuality Should Be Respected



Most of us live in a standardized life, we are often forced to do the same things, and we do those things. In contrast, we can see some people with highly individual look and who live with their own ways, many people view them unfavorably, then, what do you think about them? I think that they do very well, because they are confidant about themselves, not aware of the way other people are looking at them. For example, which kind of person do you prefer? A person who lives the same life with other people, and a person who live his/her own life that is different to other people's. Most of you must prefer the latter. By the same token, expression of individuality can be respected, though nowadays it is not. Also, people should not view them as wrong people, they are just "Different".

The definition of "Individuality" here is a person or thing of individual or distinctive character. Most people in Korea recognize that individuality of everyone is not respected, it changes as the society requires. For example, people tend to avoid jobs treated contemptuously and aim at the job that can earn much money or that is respected regardless of specialty.